Christian had send me into the mail, marked up with my red chicken scratching that I hope he can read. Just some grammar-Nazi editing. There are no problems that a real human would notice. Just English teachers.
I am incredibly impressed with The Freecity of Haldane. Christian has done a great job. It's the portrait of a fantasy city - full of just the stuff you need and none of the stuff you don't. In many ways, it's the perfect complement to Zak's Vornheim, covering little tidbits I frequently forget - like that members of the watch carry whistles, and a link-boy could be a very valuable friend to have at night.
I have scarfed copious ideas from it for my Vayniris campaign.
So get it. I mean that. Get it.
- Ark (Staggering off to go read the first Vayniris Anthology submission.)