Good job, though Twi's neck's a little long and her eyes could use some work. Maybe shorten her horn some, as well. Oh, and her legs should spread out more towards the hooves
Well, drat! Here I was, thinking that I was special... (dejectedly kicks dirt with hoof)
Egads!Your niece will love it.
Now that's more like it. I've been waiting for a MLP from you. I prefer the scary ponies, like Nightmare Moon, though. More interesting. Though Apple Jack is all right too, 'cause she's a country-bumpkin. Wait, what am I saying? I don't watch that show! ...Much...
Clearly, otherwise you'd know her name's Applejack :pI sentence you to watch all 76 episodes currently out (you can skip the movie), plus the remainder of this season - especially the upcoming Weird Al one!
You forgot her wings. ;)